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Mary Rosenblum
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Good evening all! Welcome to
our regular Professional Connection Live interview.
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Tonight we'll be chatting with
Louise Marley, For twenty-five years, Louise has been a concert and opera
singer, as well as a teacher of singing. Her musical life informed her
writing life in many ways.
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She has published quite a bit
of excellent fiction.
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Sing the Light, a science fantasy novel about singers, was published in
1995. Sing the Warmth and Receive the Gift followed, in 1996 and 1997. The
Terrorists of Irustan, a novel inspired by the takeover of Taliban in Afghanistan, appeared
in trade paperback form in 1999.
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The next year came The Glass
Harmonica, a return to a musical theme, inspired by a concert Louise
had sung a decade before which included a glass harmonica player. The Maquisarde
is out now, with The Child Goddess out in May.
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I recently red The Glass
Harmonica...an historical fantasy, in a way
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although it also takes place in
the present. It's an excellent book Good read!
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Louise, welcome! I'm delighted
to have you here as my guest!
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Louise Marley
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Thanks, Mary. Hi, everyone.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I I'm fascinated by your dual
career in both music and words
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how have they influenced each
other?
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Louise Marley
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This is always a hard question
to answer
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because I think it's hard to
explain the artistic impulse and
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how it finds its outlet. But
in music
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we study form and structure,
and of course it's about expressing feelings
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and that helped me a lot when
it came to writing prose.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Indeed....are the form and
structure of the two types of expression at all similar?
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Louise Marley
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As it turns out, they are! A
novel, for example
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is structured very much like a
symphony, or a sonata.
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There are themes, and motifs,
and there is movement.
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I relate, in my mind, the
various themes to plots and subplots.
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Mary Rosenblum
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That's fascinating. Although I
have played an instrument..more than one...I never really studied musical
form, and I find that fascinating....
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1. You published an article
called "Five Music Lessons for Writers." What was that about?
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Louise Marley
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Ah, now that was about the
discipline, which I haven't yet mentioned
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and this relates to the title
of our chat today. Because as an artist
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you can't wait for the exact
right moment to practice, whether it's the piano
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or your ballet steps, or your
pitching in baseball
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practice has to happen on a
regular basis, and that takes discipline
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and discipline is one thing a
classical singer understands, or they fail."
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Mary Rosenblum
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And it is one thing, in my
experience, that a writer needs to cultivate if that person really wants to
have a professional career in writing!
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Louise Marley
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I completely agree. One of my
favorite ideas
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is that talent is only part of
the gift of an artist. Without discipline, and by that I mean
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structuring your working life,
the talent is wasted, or only partly utilized."
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Mary Rosenblum
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So how do you, for example,
structure your writing life?
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Louise Marley
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The main thing, I think, is
that I consider structuring my writing life
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to be very important .
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It does change, depending on
what's going on at the moment, but
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I always, always, have some
sort of plan in mind for my days, so that I get everything in.
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pook
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How do you put structure in your
day when it isn't external? Like 9-5?
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Louise Marley
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This takes some thought, and
some effort at determining priorities .
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Some writers hate deadlines,
but I find them really helpful in keeping myself motivated
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and I literally (this is a
little boring, but true) have a working schedule that I stick to,
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which includes exercise, the
housework and cooking (I love to cook) and taking care of my dog
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and getting a minimum amount
of writing done every single day!
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Mary Rosenblum
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I must say that after spending
quite a bit of my writing life with a very fluid schedule,
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my website duties and Long
Ridge students have really made me pay attention to schedules! There are no
longer an 'infinite' number of hours in the day! :-)
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Louise Marley
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That's so true
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and as you get more and more
in demand, it gets harder
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and you have to practice sayiing
'no' occasionally, which is where
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priorities come in!
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pook
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Self initiated deadlines?
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Louise Marley
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Great, great idea! I learned
to do that with music, because
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if you wait too long, your
performance will stink, frankly. So I would know
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I had to know the music three
months before, or three weeks, or whatever.
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pook
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What do you write? Are you
published? I missed the very beginning.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Actually
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why don't you tell us a bit
more about the type of fiction you write.
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Louise Marley
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I write mostly science
fiction, with a bit of fantasy, and mostly novels
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with a few short stories here
and there. And yes, I'm delighted
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to say that I have published
six novels, with a seventh and eighth on their way.
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Mary Rosenblum
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And good ones, too! :-) But
getting back to writing and discipline,
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what about writer's block...the
sort that simply freezes someone at a blank screen? What then?
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Louise Marley
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Actually, I've always said I
don't believe in writer's block, but sometimes
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I feel like I'm tempting fate
when I say it. Just the same
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it seems to me there are
several ways to jump-start that flow of creativity that
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results in material. For me,
exercise is a great trick,
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or housework, something that
occupies the body or the hands
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but not the mind. My son (also
a writer) likes a shower
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and then there's always the
trick of working on a different project if one seems stalled. The main
thing
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is that you sit down at that
typewriter or computer or yellow pad
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every day! Or at least a
certain number of days every week.
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Mary Rosenblum
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What about those times when you
just DON’T feel like it? Is the writing really worse? Or does it just
seem like it?
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Louise Marley
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I've written enough now that I
can say, emphatically, that the writing does feel worse
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but in fact is not. In fact,
just beginning to write, even if you think it's going to be horrible
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sometimes results in the most
amazing stuff. I think the brain works like an electrical outlet
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and you have to connect with
it. And while we're speaking of that
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I must say that I know some
good writers who get completely sidelined by
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watching television instead of
writing! a mind-number if there ever was one.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Which is why
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my TV is upstairs and
relatively inaccessible... :-) I don't think it has been on in...months.
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But as a teacher and I writer,
I'd like to really
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ditto what you had to say about
feeling that your work is bad. Not only have I found that how I feel about
a piece
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often has very little to do
with the quality...but as an example, I just received a story
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from a student who apologized
because it was...well, an unrepeatable word. It was actually
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a VERY publishable personal
narrative and I suspect she'll sell it on the first send-out.
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Louise Marley
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Oh, I think I know that word!
LOL.
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Mary Rosenblum
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We are LOUSY judges of our own
work at times!
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Louise Marley
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Yes, indeed.
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coway
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Did you ever feel like you would
never be good enough to publish,,,,or did you just know that with enough
effort it would come?
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Louise Marley
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My goodness, I thought the
world of published writers
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was like a closed, charmed
circle, and I couldn't find the way in! But once that first
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little miracle happens, I
began to have confidence, and I have to say, I write
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better and faster with a bit
of confidence.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I agree. Sales REALLY help your
confidence...as does reader feedback!
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Louise Marley
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Yes, yes, yes.
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pook
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I feel like I write a lot,
character sketches, ideas for plot but I am not getting a piece finished.
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Louise Marley
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Very important consideration!
I have a sort of pathological
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abhorrence of unfinished
stuff. Sometimes it just hangs out there for
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an awfully long time, but I'm
really obsessive about finishing things. . . not that
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that's always good. Sometimes
they deserve to be abandoned .
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But we can't sell them if we
don't finish them. Discipline again.
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Mary Rosenblum
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And remember that every piece
you finish...even if you NEVER send it off...increases your ability.
Practice. That must
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have its counterpart in music,
yes?
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Louise Marley
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Yes, it does, but this is one
area
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in which writing differs. In
music, most of us are interpreting
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the work of others, the
original work, that is. When we write
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we're responsible for the
whole thing, beginning, middle, and end. And I do think
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there is a sort of roadblock
sometimes, worrying over whether we're making the right
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choices, or taking our plot in
the right direction. Sometimes
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as Oliver Goldsmith wrote, you
just have to put something down
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so you have something to
change later.
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molly
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I never feel my writing is good
enough to send off, I cringe at the thought of someone else seeing it. Is
this normal or is my work probably just that bad? lol, sorry but I struggle
with this.
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Louise Marley
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Molly, you have lots of
company! I think this is an area
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where a critique group really
helps, or even a class in writing to make certain
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you have the basic tools at
your disposal. But self-doubt is probably the hardest
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challenge an artist of any
sort has to face.
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Mary Rosenblum
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It sure is, and we ALL wrestle
with it, even AFTER we publish!!
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Louise Marley
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Yep.
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sailor
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I try to allocate time to write,
but many days all I get done is research or working on an outline instead
of actual writing. I feel like that does not count - I need to spend some
time actually writing each day. Is that what you do?
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Louise Marley
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It is, in fact, and it's a
good point. Because
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while research is great (and
really, really fun) it only counts when you put it into the work! And as to
outlines
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omigosh. I hate them, but
they're a necessary evil. And they're only what they're called --
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outlines. They're not a story.
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chatty lady
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I sent a sample story into a
publishing house and got a email from the Publisher himself asking for more
stories, 8 to 10 in a book. It took awhile but I did it and before
sending it in, emailed him to ask if he needed anything besides content
page, intro etc. I got an email back saying they went out of business due
to lack of sales. As Mary said, welcome to the world of publishing.
Bummer!!! Is this normal?
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Louise Marley
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Normal, no. Common, yes.
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I'm so sorry that happened to
you! It's great you have someone with Mary's rep and experience
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to help you get through it.
Still
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weren't you encouraged? I
would have been.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Very good point, Louise. He DID
want to publish your work, Chatty. Someone else will, too!
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paja
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Even with a schedule, I've never
knowingly been able to repeat actions, other than hygiene, for more than a
few days. Any ideas to help me get on track?
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Louise Marley
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Well, hygiene is a start! LOL
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but I do think that sometimes
having a critique group that meets regularly
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helps you keep yourself on
track. If you know
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that you're expected to read ten
pages of your work every two weeks
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that would maybe help you go
to the computer on a regular basis
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and I do mean regular,
inasmuch as possible.
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Every day at 8:30, for example. You know
it's coming, and
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more importantly, your brain,
the creative part, knows it's coming.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Habits are not always BAD! :-)
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Louise Marley
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Hope not. We're such creatures
of habit.
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pook
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It is so self revealing to
write.
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Louise Marley
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Is that a question? It is,
indeed. Sometimes we scare ourselves, and sometimes
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we heal ourselves.
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shoutjoy
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I don't do outlines, is that OK?
I just write what comes out.
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Louise Marley
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The thing about not doing
outlines
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is that you can make yourself
have to do a lot more substantive rewriting .
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At least with an outline you
have an idea where you're going, but
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you're still free to diverge
from the plan!
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chatty lady
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Yes I was encouraged and thank
you. decided I'd either sell the entire book or have 8 short stories to
peddle, as they can all stand alone if need be.
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Louise Marley
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Get 'em out there!
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pjwriter2
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I am one of the worlds great procrastinators
how do you overcome that?
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Louise Marley
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Ah. I am married to one of
your kindred spirits. Just watching him
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struggle with the messes
caused by procrastination is enough to get me organized!
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However, it's just not my
nature. I'm obsessive, about my work, about my exercise, even about
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my poor dog (Scottie) who has to
be the best -behaved, the best-groomed, the best . ..
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well, you get the picture.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Maybe starting small would
help?
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Make one deadline, get one
thing finished by that time. The sense of getting it done may be rewarding
enough to help you face the next deadline!
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Louise Marley
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Great suggestion.
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pook
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I need an outline or it doesn't
go where it's supposed to. I have to think it thru to the end.
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Louise Marley
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Terrific! I do find that
thinking the plot all the way through exhausts me, but then
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as I'm working on the novel,
I'm glad I know where I'm going to end up. Still
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I feel free to change the way
I get there.
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chatty lady
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There are certain activities I
enjoy, certain TV shows I like and even certain treats which I will not
allow myself until I have written X amount of pages, sort of a reward
system. If you are honest with yourself, this really works.
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Louise Marley
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Of course it does. But it
means that you have a natural flair for discipline! Congratulations.
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Let me add
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I know too many writers who do
more talking about writing than actual writing. Not helpful.
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coway
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What do you do? For example: I
thought I mastered show vs tell, but learned from several writers I still
tell...I feel hopeless, what would you do?
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Louise Marley
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Ah, go to the opera! LOL. . .
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I learned very well from
singing opera scenes about what action is, and what is
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simply narration. Can you
imagine your characters DOING what you want them to do, rather than
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the narrator TALKING about it?
And dialogue is a fabulous tool for this, too --
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which is what opera is, of
course. All dialogue.
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pook
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Isn't dialogue the best way to
show?
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Louise Marley
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Not always. What about great
action scenes? Have you seen Lord of the Rings? Wow . . .
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such an incredible balance
between huge action scenes and intimate character dialogue. Love it.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Actually, to add to your answer
to Coway...there are articles on the website on how to actually DO show
don't tell...
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including examples. They're in
Writing Craft. Check the index there, Coway.
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Louise Marley
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I think I will, too.
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shoutjoy
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Word count seems to organize my
writing a lot like outlines do. I have to change my plot sometimes just to
make word count.
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Louise Marley
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Hmmm . . . I only use word
count for getting paid, or for fitting into a format. For example, I'm at
work
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on a YA novel, and they only
want 60,000 words. I normally write about twice that,
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but you know, if it works for
you, and you're producing good stuff, don't change! Be true to your own
muse.
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Mary Rosenblum
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On the other hand....as someone
who writes predominantly short fiction...there is a benefit
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to realizing that your plot is
NOT going to work with 5000 words but will need 10 or 15000
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and changing it BEFORE you
realize you have no market! :-)
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Different mindset, Louise. :-)
I feel very schizophrenic at times!
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Louise Marley
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Well, when we do it for a
living
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we have to consider
everything.
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sailor
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I may have the opportunity to
join a local critique group, but I write nf articles and the rest of them
write fiction novels. One member used to write nf books. Do you think they
would be able to give me good feedback? I'm in a small town and don't have
a lot of options in this area.
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Louise Marley
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I have two writer's groups,
and in one of them, the oldest, there are six writers. No one in it
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writes sf or fantasy. Everyone
is doing different things
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and it works very well.
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Mary Rosenblum
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If it doesn't work for you,
Sailor, you can always leave it! You're not marrying it! :-)
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Louise Marley
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Well said.
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cloux
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Do you keep a writing journal?
If so, do you keep the journal for just writing ideas or personal thoughts?
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Louise Marley
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Journals are being discussed a
lot these days, what with blogs and so forth
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but my feeling is that when
I'm writing, I want to be working on the project at hand. so for me
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a weblog or a journal or diary
would be wasting the writing. People have different
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needs, however. But I had a
couple of friends who tried to help their writing by
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doing something called
"The Artist's Way." Problem was, all they did was "The Artist’s
Way." Still no writing.
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See, I am obsessive.
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shoutjoy
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You only use word count for
getting paid, isn't that the goal? teehee
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Louise Marley
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Tee hee hee. Well, with short
fiction
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you get paid by the word, and
of course the editors have to buy
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what will fit in the magazine.
But I did run into a problem
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with one of my novels being
too long, and thus too expensive to print. And I DID and I DO
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want my publishers to be happy
with me.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Did you end up cutting the
novel to fit, Louise? Or simply sending it elsewhere?
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Louise Marley
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This was a great experience. My
editor suggested
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taking out a few scenes.
Instead, I went all through the manuscript, and took out one
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page from every chapter by
tightening the prose. Wow. What a fabulous exercise
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that was, and the book was
incredibly stronger for it! (Terrorists of Irustan)
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Mary Rosenblum
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Now that's a timely
observation! I just finished doing a Forum on basic editing...tightening
without changing! Aha! It IS worthwhile! A real-world example!
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pook
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I can't seem to get a short
story plot going. It seems like there is too much to develop. That is why I
never finish anything.
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Louise Marley
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Oh, yes . . . I have a little
trouble with short forms myself. I seem to have ideas like yours,
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that simply take a lot more
space. Nothing wrong with that, intrinsically. The nice thing about short
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forms is that you can see your
results in less time. But frankly, I think short stories are just as hard
to write
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as novels. I'm interested to
see what Mary has to say about that, too.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Oh, I agree! I actually think
short stories are harder to write than novels
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because you have to do much
more in much less space!
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Novels are my relaxation. Short
stories are my obsession! LOL
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senicynt
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Hi, How would you compare an
interesting story arc to music? For instance, rap is uninteresting to me
musically because it is atonal, monotone or dual note. Whereas blues covers
a wide array or notes.
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Louise Marley
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I agree about rap, but my much
more hip son tells me rap is about the words, not the music. But yes
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story arc and musical form
have a great deal in common. Particularly, in my mind, the large forms,
sonata
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and symphonic form. I sort of
feel it in my gut as I work, which I think may come from having studied
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and performed classical music
for such a long time. I also
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performed a lot of folk music,
and that may relate to short story form,
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but I haven't thought that one
through!
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Mary Rosenblum
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While we're on the topic of
music...clearly music and musicians play a large role in Glass
Harmonica...but in general...
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how has music and your study of
music influenced your writing?
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Louise Marley
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Directly, I think my musical
sense inflects my prose style. And I think my acting experience
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as in the operas and musical
theater roles I did, informed my sense of drama
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and my favorite fiction is
dramatic. Something HAPPENS. Which is why I'm impatient
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with literary fiction,
particularly literary short fiction.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Here here...:-) But your
fiction is also quite strongly character driven. Has your acting experience
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in opera also affected your
sense of characterization?
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Louise Marley
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Yes, a thousand times yes!
Opera characters
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have very little to go on. A
few words, a lot of notes to sing, a costume --
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it was always hard to pin down
a really interesting characterization. And so now
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I expect each and every
character to leap out of the page, be really distinctive. Hardest, of
course,
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with principal characters.
Easier with the 'comprimarios'--the minor ones.
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Mary Rosenblum
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So what is your process for
creating a really strong, three dimensional character? Where do you begin?
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Louise Marley
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This is a tough question, and
I think there are different answers. In some cases, as in my
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newest book, the main
character had form in my mind before I even started. But sometimes
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the character's personality
and nature are determined partly by what their role in the plot will be
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and so I guess it depends on
the kind of story I'm writing. No one technique.
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And of course, it changes as
the book goes on, and then
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I go back and make it all tie
together.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Do you make notes about your
character, give them a complete past before you begin?
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Louise Marley
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No, but I know people who do. There's
my obsession again . . . if I'm going to write, I want it to be part of the
story.
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Let me add, though
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its so important for
characters to have motivations, and challenges. If they're not in trouble
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there's no plot . And so I do
spend a good bit of energy
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figuring out their backstory,
their reasons for things, and find a reason why they got into the jam
they're in.
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sailor
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Do you play music in the
background as you write? Do you ever listen to or recall a piece of music
to get into the mood to write a particular scene?
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Louise Marley
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Only with The Glass Harmonica!
Usually I find music distracting. But when I was writing that one
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I was in a heavy Mozart
period. String quartets, especially! If I do
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listen to music, it's always
instrumental and classical. No singing, because then I start listening to
that instead
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of seeing the scene in my mind
that I'm at work on.
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Mary Rosenblum
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That's interesting. When my
kids were young, I used headphones and music to create a private
'office'...I didn't have a separate roo
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but now, I find music
distracting while I write.
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Louise Marley
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Oh, how curious! . . .
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Our habits do change, don't
they? For me, when I light my little aroma therapy candle, it means it's
time to get off
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eBay, and get to work! LOL.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I guess we each have our own
routines and rituals! :-)
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senicynt
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Opera - It has relatively few
words and many notes. How would you compare that to writing? Would the
multiple notes be the background information, the descriptions of place or
scene? Then would the few words be the dialog that crystallizes the scene?
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Louise Marley
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I think you've expressed that
beautifully .
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In fact the definition of the
aria/recitative is that the recitative tells the story
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and the aria expresses the
emotions about what's happening.
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Tere's the old joke about
someone asking why everything is sung in opera
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and the answer is, if you have
to ask, you won't understand the answer.
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But in fact, the melodies and
harmonies and rhythms (and high and low notes, of course) do tell us things
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about how the character is
feeling, as well as build tension about the events on the stage.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Hmmm...how do those melodies
and harmonies relate to the rhythms of the words and the descriptives we
use in prose?
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Louise Marley
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Well, sometimes, as in
something I'm reading now (Gregory Maguire)
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the prose is so lovely, like a
gorgeous melody, that it has value in and of itself. But other time
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as with--oh, that man who
wrote Get Shorty--the prose is so minimal you hardly notice it
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and it's all about what
happens next. Both things happen in opera, as well .
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The tunes in the opera Carmen,
for example, are so fabulous that the composer (Bizet) set them
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into a suite for string
quartet. But they also express the distinctive natures of each of the
characters
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the gypsy, the lieutenant, the
too, too sweet little girl from back home. If you know the opera!
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Mary Rosenblum
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I played that suite on the
violin. :-) I love that opera.
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Louise Marley
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Let me add
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it doesn't have to be opera!
Jazz, too, or even folk music --
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those kinds of music tell us a
lot about a story or the people in it, and the music itself
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has a lot to do with creating
emotions. In my own writing, I feel best about it when emotions are running
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high, for both the characters
and, I devoutly hope, the reader.
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But the most important
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attribute of music as it
relates to prose, is that there can be a lovely rhythm to the way words are
strung together ,
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which is why I like to read my
work aloud, to see if it flows or not. I always read everything aloud, and
if it
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is easy to speak the text,
then I have confidence it's my best work.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Have you ever tried reading it
into a tape recorder and playing it back?
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Louise Marley
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No, but that's a good idea! I
usually read to my critique groups
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rather than have the
'homework' arrangement some groups do. I like reading it in the presence
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of critical ears. Sometimes
I'm surprised at how well it goes, and sometimes
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I catch really clunky stuff,
or just plain glaring errors
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when I hear it spoken aloud.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I have found that if you can
get someone ELSE to read it out loud, you will hear every tiny problem in
your text!
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Louise Marley
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But don't you sometimes think,
I wish they wouldn't read so fast, or so slow, or stumble?
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Mary Rosenblum
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It really does work best with a
good reader! Which is why I don't get to do it often.
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chatty lady
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I have to agree with the writing
obsession and admit to having one big time. I am barely out of the bathroom
in the morning before my computer is turned on. I would dry up and blow
away, literally, if I couldn't write something daily. I love to write. I
love to read too, not mentioned here but very important don't you think?
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Louise Marley
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I am SO on your page! I
decided two years ago
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after sitting on an award jury
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that if I didn't read for pure
pleasure, I wouldn't write for pleasure. And I do love to write, even
though it's my work .
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I'm afraid if I didn't love
it, my readers wouldn't either.
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And as someone else said
earlier, yes, if I haven't done what I consider 'real' writing in a day,
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I feel all tensed up!
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rachel
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How long did you write before
you made your first sale?
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Louise Marley
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I was a bit quicker than most,
I think--I had a couple of strokes of good luck.
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I sold my first novel about
three years after I started writing it. I found a very helpful agent
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who is also a writing teacher
(Peter Rubie.) He made me rewrite the book three times until
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he thought it was ready, and
then he sold it in two weeks! Bless him. .
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But I was trying everything,
short stories, nonfiction, children's stories . . . I really, REALLY wanted
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to be published.
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Mary Rosenblum
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How did you acquire Mr. Rubie?
A lot of writers here are hungry for an agent...or will need one soon.
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Louise Marley
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Yes, agents are crucial.
Partly because
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so many publishers don't look
at unsolicited manuscripts these days. There are just too many being sent
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around, and people don't
always do their homework (I didn't either, at first, because I didn't know
enough.) What I did
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was study the Writer's Market
(Writers Digest Books) thoroughly. I tried a few publishers, without
success,
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so I decided to try agents
instead. I sent about about two dozen letters, and got a few people
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to look at partial or full
manuscripts. I got a lot of insults, a bit of encouragement, a lot of just
plain
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rejections, and three offers
of representation. Not really a bad mix. I signed with Peter
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because he told me what was
wrong with my book!
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Mary Rosenblum
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So Louise, when you started
getting the 'no thanks' and even more importantly...the insults,
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which agents can do in
spades!...what kept you from feeling that your work just plain
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wasn't any good? What kept you
believing in yourself?
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Louise Marley
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You know, it really was my
critique group that helped a lot
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and then, also, I loved the
world I had created, and the people in it. I mean, I really
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loved being there! So I just
persevered. I can see how people give up, though.
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I have a friend who has
written about eight middle-grade novels, good stories, and just
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can't seem to get through that
door! I think she's beginning to lose hope. Easy to do.
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But there's always something
else to try!
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Mary Rosenblum
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But you also stuck with that
first novel rather than putting it aside after a rejection or two
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and writing a new one, putting
that one aside after a rejection or two…
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Louise Marley
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Well, I rewrote a lot, and I
studied, and took classes .
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Mary Rosenblum
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Do you think sticking to that
first one was the better option?
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Louise Marley
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It was a choice I had to make
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and I liked the book enough,
and I felt the idea was original enough
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that it justified my faith.
Then, when it was finished
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I sent it off to Peter and
started on short stories and things. . . of course by then I had Peter in
my corner!
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senicynt
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Why would a potential agent
insult you? You could potentially be a huge blockbuster writer some day.
That's burning bridges.
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Louise Marley
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No kiddin'. It's amazing how
insulting their rejections could be
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and it didn't serve any
purpose! They weren't personal attacks or anything
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but some letters were
dismissive, and unnecessarily negative. I don't know why they do that.
Maybe
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they just can't put themselves
in our shoes!
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Mary Rosenblum
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I've never figured it out
either. Editors are MUCH more polite. They know they may work with us
later! :-)
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Louise Marley
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Of course, editors
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have agents to sort out the
slush for them! LOL
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chatty lady
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Do you find an agent that's a
writer, too, better or worse?
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Louise Marley
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The most important thing is
that the agent is a salesperson, because that's the crucial part
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of their work for you. It's
true, though, that these days, more often than not, a lot of the editorial
process
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takes place in the agent's
office, before the manuscript goes to an editor.
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I'm glad Peter's a writer, but
I sometimes have to remember that these are MY books, and they
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really need to stick with MY
vision. He's great, though, really he is. And he's written
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three fine books on writing.
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chatty lady
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Have you ever read a friend's
work -- one that was having no luck -- and sent their stuff to your own
publisher?
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Louise Marley
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I would never send it to my
publisher
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but I have recommended my
agent three times. He said no each time, but
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it was worth trying. I only
recommended friends I thought had good work to show.
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Let me add
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it's important to have an
agent you sort of 'chime' with--someone you can talk to, maybe even someone
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you like. Mary probably has
thoughts about that, too.
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Mary Rosenblum
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You really DO have to get along
with your agent and work as a team.
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That may mean a different
relationship for different writers.
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Louise Marley
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Peter and I have become great
friends
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but I consider that to be one
of strokes of luck
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and a great blessing for which
I'm grateful.
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molly
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There are so many people out
there writing now, how do we find our edge...the one thing that sets apart
from the vast majority? Is it our story, our style, our timing or all of
the above?
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Louise Marley
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Well, Molly, as you say
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it is all of the above, but
the essential thing is that you write
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what is, if you'll permit me
to say it, divinely yours to write.
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Everyone wants to write the
next bestseller, but believe me, there is no one
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anywhere in the business who
knows what that will be. I mean, really .
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The Lovely Bones? who would
have thunk it? I love the book, but
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I never could have guessed it
would have had the run that it did.
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Mary Rosenblum
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If anybody CAN guess, they'll
make a million on the first printing of the how-to! LOL
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Louise Marley
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So true! Another lesson
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I learned the hard way from my
musical life
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is that you must sing with
your own voice. Imitation doesn't work, and it doesn't satisfy .
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Mary Rosenblum
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Write what you love, is my
recommendation. And send your work out. You'll find the editor who loves it
eventually!
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Louise Marley
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Exactly! As Tolkien and CS
Lewis agreed, they had to write the books they wanted to read
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and look what happened to
those poor dudes.
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senicynt
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With that information, I'll view
agents as politicians rather than creative helpers. It seems they are just
seeking fancy lunches with editors on your dime.
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Louise Marley
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Oh, no, not at all! I think my
agent
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works very hard for me, well,
for both of us. He's been patient
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and never difficult or
critical (in a negative way.) He and I
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have been building my career
as partners.
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And besides, I have never paid
him a cent. He earns commission only when he
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by which I mean, we . . . sell
a book.
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Let me add, as I'm sure you've
heard before, writers don't pay agents! Publishers pay agents.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Your agent really does pay his
or her way and is, in my opinion, well worth the commission. That agent has
a LOT more experience in the
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publishing world that we do!
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Louise Marley
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Yes, and they are a buffer between
the author
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and the editor. They can
soften the bad news, and celebrate the good with us."
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Mary Rosenblum
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Louise, we're getting to the
end of our hour. I don't want you to get away without telling us a bit
about your new books. The Maquisarde is out now, right?
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And Child Goddess will be out
in May?
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What are they about?
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Louise Marley
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Yes, The Maquisarde came out
in hardcover last year, and will be out in mass market in May, with Child
Goddess in
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hardcover. The Maquisarde is
about
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a classical musician, a
flutist, who becomes a resistance fighter (it's what maquisarde means)
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and The Child Goddess is the
story of a woman Roman Catholic priest and the very, very old child she
tries
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to help. A story of lost
faith, commitment, and love . . . I can't wait. There's more on my website
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www.louisemarley.com
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Mary Rosenblum
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Cool! The Child Goddess sounds
particularly intriguing! I can't wait!
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Louise Marley
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And such a lovely cover
painting
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by John Jude Palencar, who
also did Terrorists of Irustan .
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He won the Chesley award for
that cover.
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Mary Rosenblum
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You've had great covers, that's
for sure!
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Louise Marley
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Five out of seven. Tee hee.
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chatty lady
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I realize when you send out a
MS, there are no guarantee's. But what if they ask for more, like in my
case. Should I have asked for a contract or is that considered amateur or
pushy? HELP!!
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Louise Marley
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Oh, no, at that point you send
the cleanest manuscript you can
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and light candles every day!
(LOL) And you're right ,
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there are no guarantees, but
they mut have liked your partial. Marvelous! Good luck.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Unfortunately, Chatty, there
are no guarantees at this point, and small press publisher
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do tend to have cash flow
problems that can overwhelm them suddenly.
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But your work was good enough
to catch HIS interest. It'll catch another's.
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Louise Marley
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There are some really good
small presses these days, aren't there, Mary?
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Mary Rosenblum
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There are indeed!
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senicynt
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Roman catholic WOMAN priest? SciFi
or alternate history?
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Louise Marley
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It's science fiction . . .
she's such a cool character . . . she's really my pastor
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at St. James Cathedral, in
drag . . . but don't tell him I said that.
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Mary Rosenblum
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I'm laughing. I actually am
working on a short SF story with a woman priest. :-) Looking forward to
reading Child Goddess!!
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sweet_muse
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Wow you sound so interesting,
and I am enjoying these last few minutes. I want to thank you for coming to
speak with us, I'll read the rest of your transcript when it is posted!!
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Louise Marley
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Thank you so much. And please
drop by my web site--I always answer e-mail! and the covers are all there.
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molly
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I'd like to thank you for your
insight and knowledge tonight, Its been very helpful.
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Louise Marley
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I'm so glad, Molly. You keep
writing, and sending out your material. It will happen!!
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senicynt
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Thanks for visiting Louise! and
thanks Mary for always bringing in interesting people! :-)
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Louise Marley
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This was a joy for me.
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Mary Rosenblum
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Louise, thank you so much for
coming!
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Goodnight, Louise! See you
soon!
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I enjoyed that, and I really
recommend her books.
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She is a thoughtful writer who
gives you a strong plot, interesting ideas, and rich characters.
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WELL worth the cover price!
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Thank you all for coming!
Good night!
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