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Questions from the Audience are presented in red.
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Mary Rosenblum |
Good evening everyone! Tonight, our guests - two for the price of one - are Joyce and Jim Lavene. They have written and sold more than forty romance and mystery novels together since 1999 (including the award winning Sharyn Howard mystery series). |
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They also write non-fiction articles and short stories. They are active in local and national writer's groups and live in North Carolina with their family. |
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Personally, I am totally impressed with anyone who can turn out that many novels in that space of time! |
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Clearly marriage must really help with productivity! :-) |
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Joyce and Jim, welcome to our Professional Connection! |
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We're delighted to have you here |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Thanks Mary, we're glad to be here. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I have to say, the idea of being married to another writer seems like it could be either |
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wonderful or absolutely awful! Clearly you folk make it work, |
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so I'm curious. Were you both writers BEFORE you were married? Or did marriage come first? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We cheated. We worked together before we wrote together. |
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Only Joyce wrote before we were married. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
That's cool! |
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Jim Lavene |
I was a late bloomer. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
But clearly you make it work! You collaborate on everything, right? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Right! |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Whose idea was it to begin collaborating? |
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Jim Lavene |
It was mine. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
To be honest, I'm intrigued about your Romance novels...at least these should have |
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real male characters, yes? :-) |
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Jim Lavene |
As real as she'll let me make them. |
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Joyce Lavene |
Haha ! :-) |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Well...Romance is a shall we say...uh...ideal sort of world anyway. :-) |
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So do you have a system that you always use, when you work on a novel? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes. |
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We always start with characters, then add plot. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
That's how I start most of my fiction, I have to admit. Character first. |
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So how do you divide the work? Chapter by chapter? POV by POV? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We don't divide. |
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We work out the idea, then outline. |
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Then we create the rough draft, then do revisions. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
So, does one person type for awhile, then get up and the other takes over? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Sometimes but Jim is the fastest typist. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I'm impressed. I have collaborated before, but we used dual POVs and each wrote the scene where |
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that POV was on stage, then revised the other writer's scene. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We create the scene and characters by talking together as we type. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
You are the first collaboration I've run into where you share the draft all the way through. |
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Sounds great, actually! Good reason to get married, LOL. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
It works for us. It's like storytelling. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Clearly you like to tell similar stories! Do you ever have arguments about what comes next? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yeah. 32 years in April... |
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We think a lot alike. |
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Sometimes we disagree over something |
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but we have strict rules in our partnership. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
What kind of rules? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We have to agree on a character, scene or a plot before we write it. |
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It probably works for us because we were in business together before. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Alright...you two are just too perfect! :-) It's not fair! And probably explains why you |
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have 40 novels out in about four years!!! :-) So what kind of business were you in? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We were in the supply business |
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but we are far from perfect... we're just willing to work with what we have. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
And you clearly do that very well! I'm quite envious! I think it would be a LOT of fun to work |
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with someone regularly! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
It is a lot of fun. We travel together, |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
dream together. We've always been best friends. |
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paja |
Working together, do you need time away from each other? How do you arrange that? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Both of us have separate hobbies that gives us time away. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I'm curious. What kind of hobbies do you enjoy? Although how you have time for hobbies, |
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prolific as you are, escapes me! :-) |
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Joyce Lavene |
I'm into herbs and painting. |
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Jim Lavene |
I tear apart computers and put them back together... |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We have a fairly rigid work schedule. |
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Hobbies always stay separate. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
You really seem to have established a very solid working and living relationship. I truely am impressed! Do you ever |
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have trouble with deadline pressure? You sound too efficient for that, actually! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes. especially with revisions. |
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We hate revisions. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Oh, I'm so happy to hear that you're human!!! (I'm laughing). Tell you what. |
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I'll swap you. Trade you first drafts for revisions. I hate first drafts! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Oh those are fun... |
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We just hate when we're done with a story |
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but it comes back again. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I think that's always true...hating to be done with a story. You've given all these people |
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real lives and now you have to go on! Do you find it |
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difficult to put those characters out of your head and start the next book? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Always. |
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We spend so much time in their heads |
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it's as bad as when your kids finally get interesting -- |
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then they don't want anything to do with you. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Yeah, or when they leave home and move out of the state! Actually |
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that could be a big problem when you are moving so quickly from book to book, I would think. |
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How do you 'exorcise' that book to begin the new one? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We always take a break and get away for a while between books. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Good way of doing it! |
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rupbert |
Has one of you ever had a block in creativity or motivation? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes Rupbert, everyone does from time to time. |
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We've learned to back off when that happens, |
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take apart a few computers and paint a few pictures. |
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mbvoelker |
How do you develop your characters? Do each of you work on one of them or do you work on them together? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We mostly work on them together, |
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except for those individual flashes of brilliance -- |
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you know, guess what I learned about that character. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Does either of you have 'the last word' if you can't agree, or does it vary? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
It varies. There are always degrees of passion. |
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We try to honor whoever is most passionate in their ideas. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Good compromising! |
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mfuchs |
How about scenes? Do you split them? Rewrite each other? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We don't split scenes. We tried that, it causes to many problems |
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and we always rewrite together. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Sounds as if you could use two keyboards and one screen! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
One keyboard, four hands, one big screen |
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and God help anyone who has to get up to go to the bathroom |
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in the middle of a scene. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Well, I've done one-piano four hands playing, but never tried it with a computer keyboard! Actually |
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I am finding this very fascinating because I suspect this is a very rare form of collaboration. You really do think alike |
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and create alike, obviously. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We do. Both of us have very dominant personalities. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
It wouldn't work any other way. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
You're right, I suspect it wouldn't. |
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nan |
Which did you start with first -- romance or mystery? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We started with romance first because we thought it was the easiest market to break into. |
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We wrote our first mystery because our editor told us it paid more.:-) |
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Mary Rosenblum |
So, for those hungry and unpublished writers out there, did you find that |
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your guesses were correct? Not to mention your agent's claim? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes, romance is still the easiest place to break in as a novelist. |
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As far as mystery, it's only better respected than romance. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I agree. I've found that of all the genres, mystery gets the most respect. Do you have any tips for the Romance writers in the audience |
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who are trying to break in? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
J&J Learn the rules. Follow publisher's guidelines carefully. Don't give up! |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Good ones! |
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mfuchs |
Were both of you big readers of those genres -- of Romance? |
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Jim Lavene |
I'm a big Scifi reader. We've written a few of those too. But the market is tough. |
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Joyce Lavene |
I'm the romance reader. We both read mystery. |
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annie |
Are there any series in Romance or is that only in Fantasy and Mystery? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Publisher's don't like series romance right now. |
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We are doing a SF romance series. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I was just going to mention the SF and Fantasy romance lines. They are new and growing, I gather. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes, paranormal too. LOR and Harry Potter are changing everything. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Change is good. :-) New Markets! What about your Sharyn Howard series. Want to tell us a bit about it? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We love Sharyn Howard. She's good and strong and honest. |
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Sometimes she makes mistakes but she deals with them. |
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Sharyn is the third generation sheriff in a small town that's dealing with changes from growth |
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and lifestyle. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
And in each book you have an historical murder along with a current murder? Am I right about that? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes. we incorporate one retro murder that ties in with what's happening now. |
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Sometimes the murders go as far back as the one in our December 2003 book from the |
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Civil War. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Now how many books have you already published in this series? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
In December it will be eight books. |
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But we were just asked to sign for another three books. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
So do you ever worry about the Cabot Cove Syndrome (Murder She Wrote), where the city has the highest per capita murder rate in the US? |
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And congrats on that three book deal, by the way!! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes. thanks. |
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But all murder mysteries are that way. |
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We handle that somewhat by making each one of our books one season, spring, summer, |
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therefore we only actually have 4 murders in our small town each year. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
That's not bad. :-) |
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mbvoelker |
How do you prevent the series from going stale and getting repetitious? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
It's something you have to work on from the beginning. |
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We've given ourselves a huge and growing cast of characters from many time frames |
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but we still worry about it and that keeps us on our toes. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Each book is a stand alone though, right? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I think that is probably the most difficult part of any series, |
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that and handling the character. How do you approach the problem |
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of creating the character each time for the novice reader while not boring your regulars? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Sharyn has changed a little in each book. |
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One reader wrote us recently about how she's grown as a person. |
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We love that. We try to keep up with little hints about the past in each book |
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without spoiling the backlist for new readers. |
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mbvoelker |
Do you have plots planned out many books in advance? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We plan three in advance because we sign contracts 3 at a time and |
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our editor likes to have some small idea of where we're going. |
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paige |
40 books in 4 years adds up to 1.2 books per month. How many hours a day to you write? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
8 to 10 hours a day. 5 days a week and sometimes 4 on Saturday. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Either that or you've developed novel writing software! |
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paja |
What method do you use to keep each character's traits and physical aspects correct? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We have a HUGE excel spreadsheet. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I bet, considering the number of books in the series. |
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Do you regularly bring back characters from early books...outside your core of regulars, I mean? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes, there are always characters we find that we love |
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who don't fit in to the immediate line up. We bring them back later. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
How many books do you work on at once? Or do you do them one at a time? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We always have one book being plotted, one book being written |
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and one book in revision. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Efficient! |
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mfuchs |
Do you rewrite as you go, or finish a draft first? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
When you sign those contracts, you have to learn to keep your butt in the chair. |
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We always do a rough draft first. We tell the story, get the whole thing down. |
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We don't care about grammar, punctuation, etc. We just tell the story, |
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then we go back at least two more times and polish. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Well, that's about the number of run-throughs my work gets. It seems like solid method to me. :-) |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
It's usually enough to catch problems... |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
J&J then there's always the editor's input. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I think there's a point of diminishing returns in revision |
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where those i's you dot and t's you cross don't make enough difference |
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in the story to merit the time you spend! BUT...those revisions ARE important! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
They are. They're what separates a good manuscript from a great manuscript |
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but we've known some writers who can't get out of the revision stage. |
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They revise until there's no manuscript left. There's definitely got to be a point where you say |
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enough already. This is going out the door. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Do you ever disagree about whether or not you've reached this point with a particular book? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Sometimes. When either of us has a doubt, we go over it again. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Your Sharyn Howard mysteries only account for some of your yearly avalanche :-) of books. What else are you working on this year, for example. Romance? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We just finished a paranormal romance about an FBI agent who is psychic but loses her gift. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We're finishing up a SF romance and a contemporary sexy romance. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Nice eclectic mix! What markets do you see as most open, among the Romance houses and lines? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Contemporary with lots of sex is definitely hot. But almost every house is beginning to look for |
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fantasy and books with more plot. |
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Chicklit is hot too. We don't consider it romance but some people do. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Want to explain what Chicklit is? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Chicklit is books aimed at the younger market. Bridget Jones Diary, that kind of thing. |
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They don't have to be hero and heroine falling in love and getting married |
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but they usually include the heroine falling in and out of love with several people. |
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mfuchs |
Like "Sex in the City" on TV |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Yes! |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I just posted a new Romantic Fantasy market on the website, by the way. Luna Books. It's in Writing Craft: New Markets |
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chatty lady |
When you're new and unpublished the Editors just read the first paragragh or two. What if you've written an intricate mystery that takes many turns...if they don't read the story they won't know. What did you do about that BEFORE you became famous? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
It's called the hook. If you can't hook an editor into wanting to read on to reach your intricate mystery |
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you can't hook a reader in a book store whose kids are crying. |
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You only have a few seconds to grab their attention and hold on. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I want to amplify this a bit, since I work with a LOT of intricate student plot...the hook is not something that ends at the end of page one. |
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It keeps on going. |
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In other words, your first paragraph hooks the reader into reading paragraph two...and that one to paragraph three… |
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and it's not a matter of the reader 'getting to' your intricate plot...you're going to pull them _through_ your intricate plot with your strong prose. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
You are so right. |
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There should be a hook at the beginning and end of each chapter as well. |
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You want to keep your reader reading. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Good point! You want to end your chapter with something that the reader wants to find out |
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in order to keep them reading on after the potty break! |
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As prolific as you are, do you even worry that the well will empty and you just won't come up with |
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something new for the next book? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
All the time. |
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We constantly clip ideas from magazines and newspapers. |
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Also, having hobbies and playing with our grandkids keep us thinking creatively. |
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mbvoelker |
Can you use the end of the book as a hook for the next book without annoying readers with something left hanging loose? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
A little. You have to be careful not to be too obvious. |
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mfuchs |
Any intentions to do a mainstream novel? Or is that market too different? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We are marketing a mainstream novel now. We wrote it last year. |
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Mainstream is a little different than genre. We like the expanse it allows you. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
And you don't even need a plot. :-) |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Only if your VERY well known.:-) |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I have a business question for you. |
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Since you are working in multiple genres, when you set out to acquire an agent |
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did you purposefully look for an agent who handled multiple genres, or did you simply luck out and |
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get someone good? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We set out to find an agent who handled what we wrote. Our agent handles mystery and romance. |
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She doesn't get all of our work. We write too much for that. We handle a lot ourselves. |
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nan |
Do your readers from one genre follow you into another? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Definitely. We get letters all the time from people who read us in multiple genres |
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and non-fiction. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
What kind of nonfiction do you do? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We do craft of writing articles |
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but our favorite is interviewing people and telling their stories. |
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We write some articles for our local paper and national magazines. We also wrote a book about |
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Diabetes. Jim became diabetic when he turned 40. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I would just like to make the point to our audience that for those who would like to make their living entirely by writing, |
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you are doing it. And you are doing it |
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without hitting the Rowling or King multimillion dollar blockbuster. You are doing it in a real |
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way by finding out which markets you can get into and writing a lot, well. So those who want to be full time writers. This is how you do it! And it's rare, too. You work hard at it. |
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Congratulations! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We always tell people that there is a whole world of writing possibilities out there. |
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You don't have to be a big name author to make money. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
And I have to be honest, that very few people are willing to apply butt to seat for ten hours a day to do it. |
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Sounds much better as a 'one day' dream! :-) |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
That's for sure. It's always surprising to us how many people |
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are willing to work 8 hours a day to earn a living |
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but they expect to write a novel in one draft. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
It is kind of amazing, huh? :-) |
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mfuchs |
Do you feel relentless pressure to produce? Or is it okay because you enjoy the process so much? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
We LOVE what we do. There are no words to describe the thrill of knowing |
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you get to wake up and be a writer today. You get to hang around with great people( your characters), |
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look at notes from people who like or dislike your work. It's great! |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I agree. And it's one of those things that you simply won't be able to do if you DON’T love it. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
And it's too hard and takes too long if you don't love it. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Joyce and Jim you have been great guests! Before we let you go, would you like to tell us about the books that are coming out soon? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Thanks. Our seventh book in the Sharyn Howard Mystery series comes out in June. |
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They are fighting fires in the Uwharries and an arsonist in Diamond Springs |
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and our next book in our SF romance series comes out in June. |
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Chrysalis is about a planet being destroyed by pollution that decides to fight back. |
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Thanks for having us tonight. We enjoyed being here. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Do give us the title of the Sharyn Howard mystery! I got it wrong, last time! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
The mystery is LAST FIRES BURNING. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I plan to buy it! Thank you so much for coming! I hope you'll agree to come back at some future time |
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and perhaps spend an evening talking about making a living as a writer by working hard rather than writing the blockbuster. |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Definitely. |
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wendyhaber |
What an inspiring interview! Thank you so much! |
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flashman |
I never thought I'd ever become a writer.. I hated writing essays in school. two years ago and many years out of school, I started the writing course with Long Ridge.. I got lucky I guess, cause since I started I have also been writing a column in a weekly Paper and have been freelancing for another one recently.. I plan to write some novels, but I want to learn the ins and outs of writing first..I have much encouragement along the way...Should I start a novel now or wait till I finish my course? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Thank you for being here Wendy. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
My vote is to start now, flashman. What do you say, Joyce and Jim? |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Start now. Orson Scott Card says we all have about 10,000 words of crap we have to get out of |
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our systems. The sooner you start, the better. |
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arfelin |
J & J, you two have something very special going on. Thanks for doing the interview. |
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Mary Rosenblum |
I think Arefelin speaks for all of us, Joyce and Jim. |
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We'll let you go! I'm sure you've already put in a long day! |
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Thanks for coming! I'll talk to you about coming back later on! |
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I'm sure we can learn a lot more from you. |
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You were great guests! |
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Great, Mary. thanks |
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Mary Rosenblum |
Thanks, and good night! |
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I'm looking forward to reading your new mystery! |
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Joyce and Jim Lavene |
Let us know what you think. We hope we were helpful. Good night. |
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